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By the time the rescue crew dragged me out of Sub-Level 3 beneath the flooded shopping complex, the man I was supposed to marry was across town cutting birthday cake for another woman, and the last message he had sent me said, “Stop making a scene.”

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Chapter 1

Of the seventeen calls I tried to make that night, almost none connected. My phone was soaked, my hands were numb, and black water was climbing the concrete pillars around me faster than I could find a way out. The one message that did reach Dennis should have brought help. Instead, it convinced him I was lying.

When I opened my eyes again, I was in an emergency room at St. Vincent Medical Center. A nurse stood beside my bed with my waterlogged coat draped over a chair, still dripping muddy water onto the linoleum. An IV line ran into the back of my hand, and every muscle in my body hurt as though I had been beaten.

“Your emergency contact finally answered,” the nurse said. “I told him you were pulled from the flooded garage at Northgate Plaza.”

Before I could respond, she called Dennis again and put the phone on speaker. Music came through first, followed by laughter and the muffled sound of people singing “Happy Birthday.” Then Dennis’s irritated voice broke through.

“What does she want now?”

The nurse stared at the phone.

“Mr. Lawson,” she said carefully, “Ms. Turner was trapped in the flooded parking structure under Northgate Plaza. Fire rescue brought her in with severe hypothermia. She could have died.”

There was silence.

Then a woman’s voice floated through the line.

Brooke.

“Dennis,” she said softly, “her location definitely showed the Regency Hotel. I showed you myself.”

Dennis exhaled like a man being forced to endure another inconvenience.

“Tori,” he said, “how much did you pay people to help you pull this off?”

Something inside me went still.

I reached across the blanket, removed the clipboard from the foot of the bed, and took the nurse’s pen. Beneath Emergency Contact, someone had written Dennis Lawson in clean block letters. I drew one heavy line through his name, then another, pressing until the paper nearly tore.

That was how my engagement ended.

But the night had started with a ring.

Dennis and I had been together four years. Our families were meeting for lunch the following afternoon, and afterward we were supposed to go to the county clerk’s office to apply for our marriage license. He had spent the entire week calling it “the beginning of our real life.”

Brooke Crawford had been part of Dennis’s life much longer than I had.

They had grown up two streets apart. Their mothers were friends. They had attended the same schools, spent summers at the same lake, and gone to each other whenever life went wrong. Dennis referred to her as “basically my little sister.”

Brooke never called him her brother.

That afternoon, she had been sitting in our kitchen wearing one of Dennis’s old college sweatshirts and drinking cocoa when she asked, “Once you’re married, are you going to forget about me?”

Dennis laughed.

“Don’t be ridiculous.”

“You’ll be busy with Tori.”

“I’ll always make time for you.”

He reached over and ruffled her hair.

I said nothing.

At ten that night, during the worst rainstorm our city had seen in years, Dennis called me from Brooke’s birthday dinner.

.

“The ring box is still in my car,” he said. “Can you grab it on your way home?”

Rain hammered my apartment windows. My phone had already flashed two flood warnings.

“Can’t we get it tomorrow?”

Brooke spoke before Dennis could answer.

“It’s fine, Dennis. I’ll go with you tomorrow morning.”

His voice changed immediately.

“Tori, it’s not a big deal. Please don’t turn this into something.”

I closed my eyes.

“I’m not turning anything into anything.”

“Then just grab the ring.”

So I did.

Northgate Plaza had closed early because of the storm. Dennis’s car was parked on Sub-Level 3, almost at the far wall in section F. The garage was dim, lit only by emergency fixtures humming overhead.

I found the velvet ring box in his back seat underneath a paper bag from the bakery Brooke loved. Powdered sugar from a pastry had spilled across the seat and dusted the box.

My phone buzzed.

Brooke had sent a photograph.

.

Dennis was leaning over a cake, lighting the candles for her.

I stared at the picture longer than I should have.

Then something slammed somewhere beyond the concrete wall.

The lights flickered.

Half the garage went dark.

I started toward the ramp.

Water rushed over the toe of my boot.

Within seconds, it reached my ankles.

I called Dennis.

No answer.

I called again.

Voicemail.

I typed with shaking fingers.

B3 is flooding. I’m trapped. Call security.

The message showed as delivered.

Then Dennis replied with a screenshot.

A red location pin showed me at the Regency Hotel downtown.

I stopped breathing.

His next message appeared.

I thought you were at the mall.

I opened my map.

The same hotel address appeared on my screen.

“That’s wrong,” I whispered.

I called Dennis again.

He picked up.

“Tori, where the hell are you?”

“In your garage. Northgate. Sub-Level 3. The water is coming in fast.”

I heard Brooke crying in the background.

“Dennis,” she said, “don’t get mad at her. Maybe she just doesn’t want to admit where she is.”

“Brooke, shut up,” I snapped. “Dennis, listen to me. Call mall security now.”

Water swirled around my calves.

For one hopeful second, I heard a chair scrape.

Then Dennis spoke in that exhausted tone he used whenever he believed I was unreasonable.

“Are you really doing this tonight?”

“Doing what?”

“This. Threatening some disaster because I’m spending one evening with Brooke.”

A surge of water slammed into the row of parked cars.

I grabbed the ring box and climbed onto the running board of a nearby SUV.

“Get me out first,” I begged. “Then you can accuse me of anything you want.”

Brooke’s voice trembled.

“Dennis, I’m scared.”

He softened instantly.

“It’s okay.”

I laughed once, bitterly.

“Dennis, if I die down here tonight, are you still going to tell her it’s okay?”

The line went silent.

Then he said, “Don’t use death to manipulate me.”

He hung up.

I tried again.

Unavailable.

He had blocked me.

I stared at the screen while freezing water climbed toward my knees.

Then I dialed 911.

No signal.

Again.

Nothing.

My battery showed nine percent.

I climbed onto the roof of the SUV and held the phone toward the ceiling.

The call connected.

“Emergency services. What is your location?”

“Northgate Plaza. B3. Section F—”

The line died.

I searched for the mall’s customer service number and called.

A man answered.

“Northgate guest services.”

“I’m trapped in the parking garage. B3. The level is flooding.”

His entire manner changed.

“Ma’am, stay with me. Can you see a pillar number?”

I leaned over the side.

“F17.”

“Good. We’re contacting fire rescue now. Get as high as you can.”

For the first time that night, I believed I might survive.

Then another call came in.

Unknown number.

I answered.

“Tori?”

Brooke.

“How did you get this number?”

She ignored the question.

“Dennis is at the Regency looking for you.”

“I’m not at the Regency.”

“The front desk saw a woman in a beige trench coat walk inside.”

I looked down at my own beige coat.

Brooke had complimented it that afternoon.

A cold realization settled over me.

“Did you do something to my location?”

She laughed softly.

“You hear how crazy you sound?”

My phone beeped.

Mall guest services again.

I switched calls.

“Ms. Turner,” the employee said, confused, “have you gotten out?”

“No.”

“A woman just called claiming to be your friend. She said you already left and this was a personal dispute.”

My stomach dropped.

“What was her name?”

“She said Crawford.”

A wave struck the SUV hard enough to rock it.

“I am still down here,” I shouted. “Do not cancel the rescue. She is lying.”

There was immediate chaos at the other end.

Someone yelled, “Get the B3 team back!”

The emergency lights went out.

Total darkness swallowed the garage.

My battery flashed one percent.

The water was at my waist as I crouched on the roof.

Then I heard pounding beyond the security shutter.

A flashlight appeared through a narrow opening.

“Fire department!” someone yelled. “Call out!”

I tried to scream.

Nothing came.

So I used the only thing I had left.

I pounded both fists against the metal roof beneath me.

Once.

Twice.

Again.

The flashlight stopped.

“Over here!”

The shutter groaned upward.

Water exploded through the opening.

Men and women in rescue gear fought through the current.

Someone grabbed my shoulders.

“Stay awake, ma’am. What’s your name?”

“Tori Turner.”

Then the darkness took me.

I did not know it yet, but while I was being carried toward an ambulance, mall security was preserving a recording that would destroy Brooke’s story, Dennis’s excuses, and every illusion I still had about the people I trusted.

Disclaimer: This story is fictional and created for entertainment purposes only. Any names, characters, places, or events are fictitious or used fictitiously. No real person or organization is intended to be portrayed.

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